Post by Fire Fox on Apr 30, 2006 3:48:56 GMT -5
I've decided to change the whole story and go into more detail.
tell me if it's good corny title but still.
Why is there a thin line between good and evil?
Why must all living things eventually meet death?
Why is the world so covered in darkness?
Why is the world enriched with hatred?
Why must we suffer while others find pleasure in our dismay?
I'm about to tell how one man changed it all...
I was awaken by the rooster at dawn. I tried to stay in bed, but kept hearing the sound of something hitting my window. Suddenly I heard a loud crash, and it was followed by a frantic. "Oh my gosh! Sorry!" I opened my eyes and saw that a rock had been thrown threw my window. I looked out the window half asleep and saw Ice Fox and Ice Katt. "I didn't do it..." said Ice Katt, then she pointed to Ice Fox and said "She did it!" Ice Fox looked a little sheepish when I first looked out the window, so I knew it was her. I simply said "Great ANOTHER broken window" and started to laugh. I went downstairs and opened the front door and Ice Fox was standing right in the doorway. She said almost whispering "I'm sorry about that." and I just responded like I always do with an "It's fine, it was about to bust anyway" even though I had just replaced that window. We all liked playing with sticks and fake weapons, our usual ritual of the day was acting out a fight. But right before we proceeded to do so, I felt a huge rush against my back and hit the ground suddenly. I rolled over and saw that I had been tackled by SD. "Whoops." said SD, as he got up. I responded with a "THANKS" trying to make it as sarcastic as possible. Now that we were all here we started to look for good sticks to make our weapons with. The first part of our act fight was finding the right sticks needed to craft our wooden weapons. Ice Katt liked to carve a bow and some dull arrows, while SD kept it simple with a wooden sword; that's length was just above his waist. Ice Fox prefered just to watch at times, but when she did fight she liked to use a club with a long handle; almost like a magic staff you'd hear about in stories. My weapon was slightly harder to make, it was a single handed slingshot. You only needed one hand to fire it, but of course it took to hands to load. We fought tournament style, in two verse two matches. In order to decide which order we went in, we found small rocks and painted numbers on them with mud. Then we placed them in a basket, shuffled them around, and one by one drew them. It ended up with SD as 1, Ice Fox as 2, Me as 3, and Ice Katt as 4. I hadn't fought Ice Katt in awhile and I was wondering how much she had improved. The matches went on at the same time, so we collided with each other on occasion. I shot my slingshots as fast as possible trying to eliminate Ice Katt, but she dodged every shot and counted with her arrow. At one point I cornered her between two tree's that were braced against each other tightly. I signaled her a "goodbye" motion, fired, and she signaled me a "Not yet" motion and shot her arrow directly at my pebble. The arrow hit the pebble and slightly missed my shoulder. I was stunned, as was she. She then said still half shocked "I planned it out like that, but I never thought it would work." After we both overcame the shock, we began to fight again. Each time we'd shoot at each other the arrows and pebbles got closer. Until finally I snagged her leg, and she admitted defeat saying "Aww you got me!" By the time our fight was over SD had already wiped the floor with Ice Fox. His swordsmanship was really close to bordering professional, in some ways his moves were professional. I always told him that he must have been a samurai in another life. It was SD verse I as usual, so we started things off like we normally do. We both ran at each other, He tried to stab at me, but I rolled to the side firing two shots. He deflected the shots off his Sword and came at me with a quick slash aimed for the torso. I fell flat on the ground and kicked the weapon out of his hands. While the sword was still flying in the air, he kept dodging my shots with his crazy monkey like dodges. At one point it was almost as if he was made of rubber. I fired straight at him, but he jumped, grabbed the falling sword and came down straight for me with what was going to be one powerful strike. foot was caught in some branches and I couldn't get it out, so there was nothing I could do. I waited for the sting of the blow, but it didn't happen. I opened my eyes and saw the he had stopped at the tip of my nose. I batted it away and said "You showoff, I would've rather had the hit." slightly laughing. After relaxing for about an hour, Ice Fox and Ice Katt said that they had to leave. Which was normal because they always left after our fight. "Does anyone want to go to this dinner I've been invited to tomorrow?" asked Ice Fox then she said "It says I can bring a guest, and I don't wanna go alone." SD said he couldn't, he some other things to tend to. Ice Katt didn't really like social events, so I doubted she would show up. I was the only one left, so I said yes.
And there I waited, for Ice Fox to arrive at my door. Ice Katt was supposed to go to the dinner with us, but like I thought she didn't show up. Little did I know, the dinner wasn’t as it seemed. Finally Ice Fox arrived at my door. We stepped out of the door and drove to the Destination of the party. When we arrived two strange men accompanied us to the table, where we sat down. I noticed the place seemed very empty for a supposedly high class dinner. Then a shadow appeared out of nowhere and said that Ice's end was at hand. I was shocked and tried to get up, but I couldn't because I was locked to the chair by my legs and arms. I looked over and saw that she was also stuck in her chair. The Strange men unlocked Ice's Trap, then shadow figure pulled out a Long Sword. It happened almost in an instant, so fast it felt like a nightmare. But indeed it did happen, the shadowy figure had killed Ice fox. As she lay there on her stomach bleeding the shadow figure tossed her out the window like old trash. The shadow figure unlocked my trap and said "Go home boy" I exploded up in rage and Got hit so hard by the shadow's hand that I flew back to the door, I found an old pistol hanging from the wall, hoped it had ammo, and aimed it at the figure. I hesitated to shoot so the shadow figure had enough time to kick the gun out of my hand, and throw me out the window. I was unconscious for four days. When I finally awoke at Kong87's house, he told me that Ice was dead and that he found me in the alley. I thought it was all a dream, but again it was true. Right then I swore I’d get revenge for what that shadow figure did to Ice Fox, but I knew I could not beat him without going through harsh training. So I headed to Mt. Volcan, an old volcano that rests right at the face of the forest. There I would begin my training.
I trained with every breath I could, thinking of that moment Ice had drew her last breath. Her sweet smile, her frienThat Queer Link-dudey charm, all gone...because of that shadowy person...I was in a rage while training, but eventually I entered a Stable state of mind, yet still full of great anger, still bleeding inside from the loss of a great friend. I set up 15 Targets along the outside of the ridge of the volcano top, I stood in the midThat Queer Link-dudee of the volcano, which had be covered by Lava that had cooled, and spun in a circle Firing 15 shots. I stopped spinning and noticed that I missed every target and it was at that moment that I heard a cry for help.
I ran down the side of the volcano as fast as I could because the voice sounded like Ice fox's!! The cries lead me into a cave. I entered the cave and found that I was in a huge temple. I followed the cry...and eventually I found myself in a huge room with a figure in the midThat Queer Link-dudee of the room lying on its knees. It was Ice fox! She was alive! I went closer and the crying began to turn into laughing.
I stopped walking closer when I discovered that it wasn’t ice fox, it was an impostor! I had fallen into yet another trap. The impostor lunged at me and tried to bite me, I dodged by a hair. Then it kicked me in the head and I went pummelling into a boulder. I got up and shot at the impostor, it dodged every shot. It came towards me and I kicked at it, it again dodged. It picked me up and threw me into the wall of the room, when I hit the wall I got the wind knocked out of me, as I laid there gasping for air, it came closer
and closer, then I remembered that moment again, the moment when Ice had been killed by that shadowy figure. I got up took out my gun and in an instant ran straight toward the impostor in a huge rage.
I began to glow a fiery red, I stopped with my gun right on the impostor’s forehead and then blew the impostor’s head to pieces.
I didn’t recall what had happened...but when I looked at the HeaThat Queer Link-dudeess impostor. I knew that I had so much rage that I finally snapped and had the power to kill without mercy. But could I harness that power? And use it to kill that shadowy figure that took Ice away from me? I went back to the mountain top, set up more targets around the Ridge of the Volcano top and spun around firing 15 shots again
I stopped spinning and discovered that I had missed all yet again,
I kept practicing over and over for weeks but still missed,
then I remembered why I was training in the first place, I spun around and began glowing once more. I fired 15 shots again. I stopped spinning and saw that all targets had been destroyed.
Two days after I hit all the targets I decided to go for a trip to Gaia to work on my dodging skills. On the way, I heard rustling in the bushes next to the road I was walking on. I kept telling myself it was nothing and continued to go along the path. Then this thing jumped out at me and tackled me to the ground!!
It was a person! I quickly grabbed this person’s arm and flung him above me, then got up and started to run. He came at me with a dagger and tried to stab me, I dodged, but not by much.
I took out my gun and shot the dagger out of his hands, he jumped back.
I demanded his name, he answered "Shockdrop" and demanded mine, I replied "Foxy Grandpa".
After the greeting I asked him the reason for the sudden attack he said it was because he thought I was one of them.
I asked him who They were but he didn’t answer, all he said was that he lost his memory and couldn’t remember.
Then he took off like lightning into the woods.
I tried to go after him but he was to fast, I sat on a conveniently placed tree stump and faded into a thought.
Why would he kill Ice? What did killing Ice do for him? I remember Ice being very private and secret all the time, but what I didn’t know was why.
So I choose to cancel going to Gaia and research more about Ice's background.
Her parents had passed on and her uncles and aunts knew nothing, but there was one more who might know something…Ice Frog. I travelled to her house to ask some questions. She was a little stand off-ish at first but then she said… "They probably killed her because of the pendant” I was so confused, so I asked what this Pendant was all about, she answered "The Crystal Pendant" "she's the guardian of it, it holds great power, power that even the gods who made it cant even stand up to…” It all got even more confusing...if they wanted the pendant...why did they kill Ice? Ice frog started to say something but before she could finish an arrow shot through an opened window and grazed Ice Frog's shoulder. I told her to stay down and carefully walked outside and saw one of the guards that accompanied us to the table at the party!
He started laughing and finally said "Stupid little fox wont you ever learn? Your messing with the big boys now..." I blinked in a foul look of stupidity and despair and he was gone, I told Ice frog it wasn’t safe here and that she needed to stay somewhere else. She agreed it was a good idea and decided to stay at another friends out a friend’s house.
I suddenly heard the guard laughing in the far part of the forest and followed it.
I stopped at a cave right near a waterfall, the laughing was coming from inside so I walked in. Such a horrible sight, dead carcass everywhere and blood spatter.
The man came out from behind a boulder and said "You must have a death wish to follow me into my own domain" I quickly snapped and said "I want answers, why did you kill Ice if she knew where the pendant was?” I shouted.
He didn’t answer instead, took out a Steel Lance.
I drew my gun and he started at me and slashed me on the chest.
I had been hit right in the beginning of the fight; I grabbed my chest in pain.
When I looked up he wasn’t anywhere to be seen.
That was until he somehow grabbed me from behind and threw me into the ceiling. Hitting the ceiling, I dropped to the ground and couldn’t get up.
He kicked me swiftly twice and threw me in a pile of bones; I landed on some jagged bones that spiked me in the back of my leg. He was tearing me to shreds and I couldn’t even defend myself at all not even get a hit in. He laughed and held the end of the lance at my neck and told me "She deserved to die for keeping that power from us” I just lay there...hearing him say that over and over again in my head. I then got very angry and started to glow, I grabbed the end of his lance right above the sharp blade and broke his lance in half.
I kicked his leg and almost broke it, but apparently I hadn’t kicked hard enough. I got up and stared straight at him he looked scared, I walked slowly toward him, remembering what he said and getting even more angry and I was aware of everything, when I reached him he tried to kick me and I grabbed his leg and bent it back to make sure I broke it this time, he cried out in pain, leaving him open to attack so I grabbed him by the neck and held him up in the air.
I stared at him Gasping for air and finally said, "You do not deserve to live for saying that" I Grabbed his neck harder and crushed it like an egg.
I dropped him on the ground and slowly stopped glowing.
I was hurt Badly from the deep gashes in my leg and the deep slash on my chest.
I needed help fast. After, the huge evil casts a big ball of energey and kills everything.
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Chapter 3
The Day Steph Asked Me For My Life Story
If Steph actually reads all of this, I will crap things. So I was about to give her URL when Sanity's Demise shot me with Youtube Videos of TrueNuff. I tried to cyber fart on his face, but almost cyber shat myself. I started glowing red with constipation. I don't know what to do, do I reply with an "lol" or do I stab him with a blister sharp valley tooth? SO I asked the grain vergence. And she said to ask Steph. So I did and she said: oh i loves you, BYE!
The end.
tell me if it's good corny title but still.
Why is there a thin line between good and evil?
Why must all living things eventually meet death?
Why is the world so covered in darkness?
Why is the world enriched with hatred?
Why must we suffer while others find pleasure in our dismay?
I'm about to tell how one man changed it all...
Prologue
I was awaken by the rooster at dawn. I tried to stay in bed, but kept hearing the sound of something hitting my window. Suddenly I heard a loud crash, and it was followed by a frantic. "Oh my gosh! Sorry!" I opened my eyes and saw that a rock had been thrown threw my window. I looked out the window half asleep and saw Ice Fox and Ice Katt. "I didn't do it..." said Ice Katt, then she pointed to Ice Fox and said "She did it!" Ice Fox looked a little sheepish when I first looked out the window, so I knew it was her. I simply said "Great ANOTHER broken window" and started to laugh. I went downstairs and opened the front door and Ice Fox was standing right in the doorway. She said almost whispering "I'm sorry about that." and I just responded like I always do with an "It's fine, it was about to bust anyway" even though I had just replaced that window. We all liked playing with sticks and fake weapons, our usual ritual of the day was acting out a fight. But right before we proceeded to do so, I felt a huge rush against my back and hit the ground suddenly. I rolled over and saw that I had been tackled by SD. "Whoops." said SD, as he got up. I responded with a "THANKS" trying to make it as sarcastic as possible. Now that we were all here we started to look for good sticks to make our weapons with. The first part of our act fight was finding the right sticks needed to craft our wooden weapons. Ice Katt liked to carve a bow and some dull arrows, while SD kept it simple with a wooden sword; that's length was just above his waist. Ice Fox prefered just to watch at times, but when she did fight she liked to use a club with a long handle; almost like a magic staff you'd hear about in stories. My weapon was slightly harder to make, it was a single handed slingshot. You only needed one hand to fire it, but of course it took to hands to load. We fought tournament style, in two verse two matches. In order to decide which order we went in, we found small rocks and painted numbers on them with mud. Then we placed them in a basket, shuffled them around, and one by one drew them. It ended up with SD as 1, Ice Fox as 2, Me as 3, and Ice Katt as 4. I hadn't fought Ice Katt in awhile and I was wondering how much she had improved. The matches went on at the same time, so we collided with each other on occasion. I shot my slingshots as fast as possible trying to eliminate Ice Katt, but she dodged every shot and counted with her arrow. At one point I cornered her between two tree's that were braced against each other tightly. I signaled her a "goodbye" motion, fired, and she signaled me a "Not yet" motion and shot her arrow directly at my pebble. The arrow hit the pebble and slightly missed my shoulder. I was stunned, as was she. She then said still half shocked "I planned it out like that, but I never thought it would work." After we both overcame the shock, we began to fight again. Each time we'd shoot at each other the arrows and pebbles got closer. Until finally I snagged her leg, and she admitted defeat saying "Aww you got me!" By the time our fight was over SD had already wiped the floor with Ice Fox. His swordsmanship was really close to bordering professional, in some ways his moves were professional. I always told him that he must have been a samurai in another life. It was SD verse I as usual, so we started things off like we normally do. We both ran at each other, He tried to stab at me, but I rolled to the side firing two shots. He deflected the shots off his Sword and came at me with a quick slash aimed for the torso. I fell flat on the ground and kicked the weapon out of his hands. While the sword was still flying in the air, he kept dodging my shots with his crazy monkey like dodges. At one point it was almost as if he was made of rubber. I fired straight at him, but he jumped, grabbed the falling sword and came down straight for me with what was going to be one powerful strike. foot was caught in some branches and I couldn't get it out, so there was nothing I could do. I waited for the sting of the blow, but it didn't happen. I opened my eyes and saw the he had stopped at the tip of my nose. I batted it away and said "You showoff, I would've rather had the hit." slightly laughing. After relaxing for about an hour, Ice Fox and Ice Katt said that they had to leave. Which was normal because they always left after our fight. "Does anyone want to go to this dinner I've been invited to tomorrow?" asked Ice Fox then she said "It says I can bring a guest, and I don't wanna go alone." SD said he couldn't, he some other things to tend to. Ice Katt didn't really like social events, so I doubted she would show up. I was the only one left, so I said yes.
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Chapter 1
Day of reckoning
Day of reckoning
And there I waited, for Ice Fox to arrive at my door. Ice Katt was supposed to go to the dinner with us, but like I thought she didn't show up. Little did I know, the dinner wasn’t as it seemed. Finally Ice Fox arrived at my door. We stepped out of the door and drove to the Destination of the party. When we arrived two strange men accompanied us to the table, where we sat down. I noticed the place seemed very empty for a supposedly high class dinner. Then a shadow appeared out of nowhere and said that Ice's end was at hand. I was shocked and tried to get up, but I couldn't because I was locked to the chair by my legs and arms. I looked over and saw that she was also stuck in her chair. The Strange men unlocked Ice's Trap, then shadow figure pulled out a Long Sword. It happened almost in an instant, so fast it felt like a nightmare. But indeed it did happen, the shadowy figure had killed Ice fox. As she lay there on her stomach bleeding the shadow figure tossed her out the window like old trash. The shadow figure unlocked my trap and said "Go home boy" I exploded up in rage and Got hit so hard by the shadow's hand that I flew back to the door, I found an old pistol hanging from the wall, hoped it had ammo, and aimed it at the figure. I hesitated to shoot so the shadow figure had enough time to kick the gun out of my hand, and throw me out the window. I was unconscious for four days. When I finally awoke at Kong87's house, he told me that Ice was dead and that he found me in the alley. I thought it was all a dream, but again it was true. Right then I swore I’d get revenge for what that shadow figure did to Ice Fox, but I knew I could not beat him without going through harsh training. So I headed to Mt. Volcan, an old volcano that rests right at the face of the forest. There I would begin my training.
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Chapter 1
Training Begins
Chapter 1
Training Begins
I trained with every breath I could, thinking of that moment Ice had drew her last breath. Her sweet smile, her frienThat Queer Link-dudey charm, all gone...because of that shadowy person...I was in a rage while training, but eventually I entered a Stable state of mind, yet still full of great anger, still bleeding inside from the loss of a great friend. I set up 15 Targets along the outside of the ridge of the volcano top, I stood in the midThat Queer Link-dudee of the volcano, which had be covered by Lava that had cooled, and spun in a circle Firing 15 shots. I stopped spinning and noticed that I missed every target and it was at that moment that I heard a cry for help.
I ran down the side of the volcano as fast as I could because the voice sounded like Ice fox's!! The cries lead me into a cave. I entered the cave and found that I was in a huge temple. I followed the cry...and eventually I found myself in a huge room with a figure in the midThat Queer Link-dudee of the room lying on its knees. It was Ice fox! She was alive! I went closer and the crying began to turn into laughing.
I stopped walking closer when I discovered that it wasn’t ice fox, it was an impostor! I had fallen into yet another trap. The impostor lunged at me and tried to bite me, I dodged by a hair. Then it kicked me in the head and I went pummelling into a boulder. I got up and shot at the impostor, it dodged every shot. It came towards me and I kicked at it, it again dodged. It picked me up and threw me into the wall of the room, when I hit the wall I got the wind knocked out of me, as I laid there gasping for air, it came closer
and closer, then I remembered that moment again, the moment when Ice had been killed by that shadowy figure. I got up took out my gun and in an instant ran straight toward the impostor in a huge rage.
I began to glow a fiery red, I stopped with my gun right on the impostor’s forehead and then blew the impostor’s head to pieces.
I didn’t recall what had happened...but when I looked at the HeaThat Queer Link-dudeess impostor. I knew that I had so much rage that I finally snapped and had the power to kill without mercy. But could I harness that power? And use it to kill that shadowy figure that took Ice away from me? I went back to the mountain top, set up more targets around the Ridge of the Volcano top and spun around firing 15 shots again
I stopped spinning and discovered that I had missed all yet again,
I kept practicing over and over for weeks but still missed,
then I remembered why I was training in the first place, I spun around and began glowing once more. I fired 15 shots again. I stopped spinning and saw that all targets had been destroyed.
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Chapter 2
The Pendant Guardian
Chapter 2
The Pendant Guardian
Two days after I hit all the targets I decided to go for a trip to Gaia to work on my dodging skills. On the way, I heard rustling in the bushes next to the road I was walking on. I kept telling myself it was nothing and continued to go along the path. Then this thing jumped out at me and tackled me to the ground!!
It was a person! I quickly grabbed this person’s arm and flung him above me, then got up and started to run. He came at me with a dagger and tried to stab me, I dodged, but not by much.
I took out my gun and shot the dagger out of his hands, he jumped back.
I demanded his name, he answered "Shockdrop" and demanded mine, I replied "Foxy Grandpa".
After the greeting I asked him the reason for the sudden attack he said it was because he thought I was one of them.
I asked him who They were but he didn’t answer, all he said was that he lost his memory and couldn’t remember.
Then he took off like lightning into the woods.
I tried to go after him but he was to fast, I sat on a conveniently placed tree stump and faded into a thought.
Why would he kill Ice? What did killing Ice do for him? I remember Ice being very private and secret all the time, but what I didn’t know was why.
So I choose to cancel going to Gaia and research more about Ice's background.
Her parents had passed on and her uncles and aunts knew nothing, but there was one more who might know something…Ice Frog. I travelled to her house to ask some questions. She was a little stand off-ish at first but then she said… "They probably killed her because of the pendant” I was so confused, so I asked what this Pendant was all about, she answered "The Crystal Pendant" "she's the guardian of it, it holds great power, power that even the gods who made it cant even stand up to…” It all got even more confusing...if they wanted the pendant...why did they kill Ice? Ice frog started to say something but before she could finish an arrow shot through an opened window and grazed Ice Frog's shoulder. I told her to stay down and carefully walked outside and saw one of the guards that accompanied us to the table at the party!
He started laughing and finally said "Stupid little fox wont you ever learn? Your messing with the big boys now..." I blinked in a foul look of stupidity and despair and he was gone, I told Ice frog it wasn’t safe here and that she needed to stay somewhere else. She agreed it was a good idea and decided to stay at another friends out a friend’s house.
I suddenly heard the guard laughing in the far part of the forest and followed it.
I stopped at a cave right near a waterfall, the laughing was coming from inside so I walked in. Such a horrible sight, dead carcass everywhere and blood spatter.
The man came out from behind a boulder and said "You must have a death wish to follow me into my own domain" I quickly snapped and said "I want answers, why did you kill Ice if she knew where the pendant was?” I shouted.
He didn’t answer instead, took out a Steel Lance.
I drew my gun and he started at me and slashed me on the chest.
I had been hit right in the beginning of the fight; I grabbed my chest in pain.
When I looked up he wasn’t anywhere to be seen.
That was until he somehow grabbed me from behind and threw me into the ceiling. Hitting the ceiling, I dropped to the ground and couldn’t get up.
He kicked me swiftly twice and threw me in a pile of bones; I landed on some jagged bones that spiked me in the back of my leg. He was tearing me to shreds and I couldn’t even defend myself at all not even get a hit in. He laughed and held the end of the lance at my neck and told me "She deserved to die for keeping that power from us” I just lay there...hearing him say that over and over again in my head. I then got very angry and started to glow, I grabbed the end of his lance right above the sharp blade and broke his lance in half.
I kicked his leg and almost broke it, but apparently I hadn’t kicked hard enough. I got up and stared straight at him he looked scared, I walked slowly toward him, remembering what he said and getting even more angry and I was aware of everything, when I reached him he tried to kick me and I grabbed his leg and bent it back to make sure I broke it this time, he cried out in pain, leaving him open to attack so I grabbed him by the neck and held him up in the air.
I stared at him Gasping for air and finally said, "You do not deserve to live for saying that" I Grabbed his neck harder and crushed it like an egg.
I dropped him on the ground and slowly stopped glowing.
I was hurt Badly from the deep gashes in my leg and the deep slash on my chest.
I needed help fast. After, the huge evil casts a big ball of energey and kills everything.
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Chapter 3
The Day Steph Asked Me For My Life Story
If Steph actually reads all of this, I will crap things. So I was about to give her URL when Sanity's Demise shot me with Youtube Videos of TrueNuff. I tried to cyber fart on his face, but almost cyber shat myself. I started glowing red with constipation. I don't know what to do, do I reply with an "lol" or do I stab him with a blister sharp valley tooth? SO I asked the grain vergence. And she said to ask Steph. So I did and she said: oh i loves you, BYE!
The end.